The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by minoomrd on Thu, 07/04/2019 - 14:51

The graph illustrates the ratio of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three 3 different nations namely Japan, Sweden and the USA. It is measured in percentage.
Overall, the all nations saw fluctuations all over the period and they assumed to increase by 2040.Moreover, it assumed Japan and the USA swap their positon but Sweden retain it’s spot.
A more detail look at the chart reveals, in 1940 the ratio of the population in Japan was 5 percent and after that it started to diminish and it continued until 1985. during 1985-2030, there will be a constant rise and the percentage of Japan will be more than doubled. At the end of the period, Japan's proportion of the population will grow sharply (roughly tripled).
According to the graph, the percentage of the ratio of the population in Sweden and the USA calculated about 7 and 9 percent respectively and the proportion of both of them grew until 1980 (approximately 15%). However, the ratio of the USA will dramatically decline between 1980 and 2020 and then it will be reach more than 25%. Sweden experienced an upward trend with a minor fluctuation and the percentage of the population will more than 25%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...od and they assumed to increase by 2040.Moreover, it assumed Japan and the USA swap thei...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...o diminish and it continued until 1985. during 1985-2030, there will be a constant ris...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76699029126 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76136372232 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2020929356 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141096036139 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644272046712 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838246400878 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107570337661 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941668121587 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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