The given line graph manifest the part of residents whose who are senior citizens from 1940 to 2040 in various nations. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
It can be clearly observed that 5% of citizens were older in 1940 of Japan. However, there is a sharp decline noticed to tiny friction in 1960. Nevertheless, there had been a static change seen throughout 1960 to 1990. Moreover, there is a dramatic increase observed from 1990 to 2030 and the percentage comprised to 10%. However, there was a speedy change seen in percentage which comprised to 27% in 2040. Moving further to Sweden, had only 7% of old people in 1940 then the number started fluctuating a lot until 12% in 1997 again it started catching speed and comprised to 25% in 2040. Analyzing further to the USA, they had 8% of people who are 65 above consequently it gradually increased to it's almost double. Although, it remains unchanged till 2020.
To cap it all. it can be vividly seen that Sweden and the USA are much more similar to each other in comparison of population. However, Japan aged population going to increased rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...rther to the USA, they had 8% of people who are 65 above consequently it gradually incr...
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Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...adually increased to its almost double. Although, it remains unchanged till 2020. To ...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... unchanged till 2020. To cap it all. it can be vividly seen that Sweden and the...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...However, Japan aged population going to increased rapidly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75773195876 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.629538018 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0866955323 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109363058858 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320434506361 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413236818303 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762239178046 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186774315847 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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