In the salad days of the millennium, society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that hard work on their fitness is the main reason for their success in the sports. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shed light on both approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion. There are myriad of things to be shared in its favor. First and foremost is in the sportsperson life their lifestyle and dedication towards their fitness play an immense role for achieving success on the ground. i would quote an instance of Virat Kohli who recently told in his interview that working on his fitness for four to six hours daily helps him to gain success in the cricket world as well as in their personal life. As a result, now he can easily score a hundred runs on the pitch and is able to run fast between pitches.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, mental strength is equally important as fitness. Hence, if a sportsperson lacks a positive attitude on the field then he may not be able to achieve his goal. Moreover, there are such players who have good physic but lacks mental toughness such as players like Ab de Villiers who right now look very fit even at the age of 46 but in high-pressure matches, he becomes nervous and not able to perform for his team. Therefore, mental strength is necessary to perform in big stages of tournaments.
Having discussed the arguments and counterarguments, I would like to infer that in any sports mental strength is above fitness. Without mental toughness, a sportsperson can not achieve success on the field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81052631579 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61021975185 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1601463079 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150201832842 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458976098021 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292670278699 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900926005499 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258600259433 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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