The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graphs provide information the amount of products transported in the Britain by using different modes of transport namely road, water, rail and pipeline from the year of 1774 to 2002. Units are measure by millions of tones.
Overall, the highest amount goods are transported by road while least amount transported by pipeline. Water and rail transport are steadily increased throughout the period.
According to the line graph, in 1974 around 70 and 40 million tones products are transported in the UK by road and rail transport. The goods transported by road was significant increased and reached to about 100 million tons in 2000. On the other hand, rail transport used are decreased to about 30 million tones goods are transported in 1994 and it rose to over 40 millions tones in 2000.
At the beginning of the period nearly 40 million tones goods were transported by water transport and then it grew to over 60 million in 2000. In the UK people lowest amount goods were transported by pipeline which was less than 10 million tons in 1974 and it rose to around 20 million at the end of the period.
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the least'.
Suggestion: while the least
...st amount goods are transported by road while least amount transported by pipeline. Water a...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'people the lowest'.
Suggestion: people the lowest
...w to over 60 million in 2000. In the UK people lowest amount goods were transported by pipeli...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd 20 million at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80829015544 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58485356623 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450777202073 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9032799603 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320038008656 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157065596889 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783770011856 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220587666294 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246613581223 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.