The graph, shows radio and television audience throughout the day, from October to December 1992. It can be observed that 4 years ago, initially there was a decline in television and radio audience between 1:00 pm to 5:00 pm.
Though, there was a significant increase in radio audience of 25% between 6:00 pm and 8:30 pm. Meanwhile, there was decrease in radio number audience between 9:00 pm to 23:00 pm of 25% to 4%. However, in television there was increase from 11:00 pm to 21:00 pm of 4% to 44% and decline from 21:30 pm to 23:00 pm of 18%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 449.0 965.302439024 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 196.424390244 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50748878362 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 53.0 106.607317073 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 116.1 283.868780488 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.1393526942 43.030603864 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183122711658 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165650762359 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172216887374 0.0843802449381 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218653686661 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148207815442 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 40.7170731707 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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