Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halves oriental and occidental there are bound to be differences on social, economical and educational front as well. The issue of gap before going to university is of no exception and irrefutable. I will explain why with pertinent argument and examples. Student needs gap off school before going to the university. They need to socialize with friends and family. In addition, student study everyday, every month and every year without opportunity to socialize with friends and family. Socialization play a key role in overall wellbeing of each individual on earth. Furthermore, research has shown that constantly keeping to oneself can lead to depression in teen and adult.
Another, pivotal aspect of the given argument is financial stability, student needs to learn the importance of working and at the same time saving for their future. Moreover, gap off school offer golden opportunity to seek for causal jobs and learn how to manage their income. Additionally, working also open doors for good customer service and effective way to communicate with others. As a matter of fact they are going to become our future leaders, the need to exposed them earlier is of great significant.
However, many people believe that they should not have a year off between finishing school and going to university. They believe that all that they have leant will be forgotten before going back to school. Ultimately, I opine that this notion is wrong. As a matter of fact, we all need break at one stage or the other in our lives to be able to find a balance in todays busy world.
To conclude, I would like to say that the minister of education and federal government should consider deeply the impart on health to study constantly without a break. In a like manner, having a year gap off school is highly beneficial but, we must be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational approach towards the same for optimal and fruitful outcomes of efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...and family. In addition, student study everyday, every month and every year without opp...
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Line 1, column 553, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
... with friends and family. Socialization play a key role in overall wellbeing of each...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d them earlier is of great significant. However, many people believe that they s...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...deral government should consider deeply the impart on health to study constantly without a...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a like manner" with adverb for "like"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...th to study constantly without a break. In a like manner, having a year gap off school is highly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 31.9359605911 185% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 336.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94642857143 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68277448019 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 379.143842365 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1059330854 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216112297264 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658102241846 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994019838762 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125652617651 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711195741917 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.