The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and give comparison where relevant.
The line graph illustrate that the total amount of births and deaths rate in European countries in the given period of 1950 to 2050.
It can be clearly seen that, in 1950, the birth rate of the country was at 750,000. Whereas, the population of the newly born increase dramatically and reached at 1000000 in 1970 which was sharply decrease at 6000000 in the year of 1990. While, the birth rate rose again and arrive on 700,000 and after that it still remained in the future.
The death rate was at 68,00000 in 1990 which was still remained same up to 2030. However, it increase slightly and rea...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...ed at 1000000 in 1970 which was sharply decrease at 6000000 in the year of 1990. While, ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...l remained same up to 2030. However, it increase slightly and reached at 8000000 in 2050...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...en graph. Whereas, death rate was still remain sane and increase in 2030.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68656716418 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24313015235 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 164.7 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6612934038 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146730546381 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799563293403 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918042457514 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125014743675 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107207496453 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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