The line graph compares and contrasts the data on the changes in the per capita consumption of beef, pork, broilers and turkey in the United States from 1955 to 2012. It is noticeable that the amount of beef consumption was by far the most popular in four types of meat in almost all years, while the figure for broilers experienced an upward trend throughout the 58-year period, with the figure eventually surpassing those for beef.
Clearly, beef was the most favourite meats in America. To specify, the total quantity of beef consumed rose from about 60 to peak of 90 pounds per person per year in the first 22-year period, but later it declined markedly through the next years to under 60 pounds in 2012. At the same period of time, the figure for pork fluctuated around 50 pounds per person.
The most tricking feature is that the consumption of broilers witnessed a significant growth from just nearly 20 pounds in 1961 before it reached a huge amount of consumption in the last research year, which was approximately three times as high as that in the early year. Moreover, there was no substantial change in the trend for turkey consumption, which was the least common meat consumed by Americans over the period of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o under 60 pounds in 2012. At the same period of time, the figure for pork fluctuated around ...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for pork fluctuated around 50 pounds per person. The most tricking feature is ...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...mon meat consumed by Americans over the period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78504672897 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50918480487 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6804022773 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079643558725 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447510253155 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046526578186 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572467385025 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254479621577 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.