The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

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The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.

The line graph represents the amount of acid rain provided by industries like transport and communication electricity, gas and water supply, domestic and other industries.
Overall, electricity, gas and water supply and other industries produced more acid rain than domestic and transport and communication. Beside, the quantity of acid rain provided by electricity, gas and water supply and other industries were descending while domestic and transport and communication remained.
In 1991, the amount of acid rain produced by electricity, gas and water supply was highest out of all 4 sectors, it was about 3,3 million tonnes. Followed by its other industries whose acid rain emissions was just over 2 million tonnes. Next is the quantity of acid rain provided by transport and communication industries which was around 0.7 million tonnes. And tat the bottom of graph is the acid rain emission of domestic, it was just over 0.5 million tonnes.
Between the year of 1995 and 1997, the quantity of acid rain of electricity, gas and water supply and other industries experience a significant drop and it was around 1.7 million tones. The same situation happened with the acid rain emission of transport and communication industries and electricity, gas and water supply which was just under 1 million. By the end of the time period surveyed, other industries had the highest amount of acid rain out of 4 sectors and the acid rain emissions of domestic still sat the bottom.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89557852596 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.375 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1384007296 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199873051433 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123704864077 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446617846505 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141148358103 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612274476238 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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