The graph below shows the weekday volume of passenger activity on the Toronto metro system for July,2017.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparison where neccesary?

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The graph below shows the weekday volume of passenger activity on the Toronto metro system for July,2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparison where neccesary?

It is observed from linear graph about the activities at Toronto Metro system from Monday to Friday in July 2007 by proportion of travelers. The data is calibrated in thousands, which is clearly and coherently represented.

It is crystal clear that, at 6'o clocks in morning, 100 thousand passenger's visiting was calculated by Toronto metro system. Moreover, It upsurged to 400 thousand travelers at 8 clocks in morning. Then, travelers had fell up-to 200 thousand at 10'o clocks in morning. In contrast, At noon, tourer remained volatile up-to 2'o clocks in noon, which were approximately 300 thousand passengers.

As far as trend was concerned, passengers were declining and reached to 100 thousand passengers in afternoon at 4'o clocks. Afterwards, traveler had reached at peak point of 400 thousand at 6'o clocks in evening.Then, travelers were starting decline till 10'o clocks at night.

Overall, it is evident that, passengers visited at Toronto Metro higher in morning and afternoon at 6'o clocks, but lowered in afternoon at 4'o clocks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...of 400 thousand at 6o clocks in evening.Then, travelers were starting decline till 1...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rting decline till 10o clocks at night. Overall, it is evident that, passengers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26946107784 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93897925365 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550898203593 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.466739606 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7777777778 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0807901601021 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424376275643 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532218647646 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639115953812 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337857038096 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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