The graph below shows the weekday volume of passenger activity on the Toronto metro system for July,2017.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparison where neccesary?

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The graph below shows the weekday volume of passenger activity on the Toronto metro system for July,2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparison where neccesary?

It is observed from linear graph about the activities at Toronto Metro system from Monday to Friday in July, 2007 by proportion of travelers. The data is calibrated in thousands.

It is crystal clear that, at 6'o clock in morning, 100 thousand passenger's visiting calculated by Toronto metro system. It upsurged to 400 thousand travelers at 8 clock in morning. Then, travelers had fell up-to 200 thousand at 10'o clock in morning. At noon, tourer remained volatile up-to 2'o clock in noon, which were approximately 300 thousand passengers.

As far as trend was concerned, passengers were declining and reached to 100 thousand passengers in afternoon at 4'o clock. Afterwards, traveler had reached at peak point of 400 thousand at 6'o clock in evening. Then, travelers were starting decline till 10'o clock at night.

Overall, it is evident that, passengers visited at Toronto Metro higher in morning and afternoon of 6'o clock , but lowered in afternoon of 4'o clock.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2007'.
Suggestion: July 2007
...o Metro system from Monday to Friday in July, 2007 by proportion of travelers. The data i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'clock' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clocks', 'clox'.
Suggestion: clocks; clox
...upsurged to 400 thousand travelers at 8 clock in morning. Then, travelers had fell up...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arting decline till 10o clock at night. Overall, it is evident that, passengers ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...her in morning and afternoon of 6o clock , but lowered in afternoon of 4o clock.
^^
Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n of 6o clock , but lowered in afternoon of 4o clock.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12658227848 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81163731281 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0355380146 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090134660981 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431434692698 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602148502671 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077244375994 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506186585072 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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