The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The graph reveals, about the drinking habit of US people according to their age group.
Overall, the percentage of non-drinkers are high in almost every age group , while, heavy drinkers are lowest.
In details, age group between 45 to 54 are ranked as highest hard drinkers with roughly 13% and 35 to 54 age group is just behind with only tine percentage (1%). An insignificant proportion (2%) are the lowest, which lies in 65 to 74 age group. While, the ratio of light drinkers are highest in 25 t0 34 age group with around 32% and lowest with approximately 5% remain in age group of over 65. 35 to 44 and 45 to 54 age group contain similar percentage of light drinkers with about 20% and nearly 23% in 16 to 24 age. The people from old age (over 65) are the maximum ex drinkers with roughly 40% and 55 to 65 age group contains around 23% of ex-drinkers. The lowest ex-drinkers remain in the age group of 25 to 34 and 35 to 54 with almost similar percentage (3%). Similarly, non drinkers are high in the age group of 16 to 24 with 60% and there is only slightly differences in other group, while, 65-74 age group is the lowest (less than 45%) in non drinkers sector
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nkers are high in almost every age group , while, heavy drinkers are lowest. In d...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st in 25 t0 34 age group with around 32% and lowest with approximately 5% remain ...
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Line 3, column 943, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'drinkers'' or 'drinker's'?
Suggestion: drinkers'; drinker's
...roup is the lowest less than 45% in non drinkers sector
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Line 3, column 958, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est less than 45% in non drinkers sector
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32568807339 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46991868724 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463302752294 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6436408887 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789863723683 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566286933144 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569357951137 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985960283133 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826608941917 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.