The graph gives information about Dubai Gold Sales in 2002
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how gold sales in dubai changed from january to december 2002.
Generally, the gold sales trend over january to december gravitate to fluctuate. Furthermore, the highest level of gold sales occurred in march which reached 350 millions of dirhams while the lowest level occurred in july and september.
In the first month, the gold sales in dubai reach to 200. during january to february, the graphic tends to increase slightly. A month later, by suddenly during february to march the trend of gold sales soared extremely. In contrast, during April to july the trend of gold rates jumped down slowly till under 150 millions of dirhams. In August, the trend leans to increase up to 80s millions of dirhams, albeit in september it could jump down significantly again. In the last trimester which contains October, November, as well as december the trend gravitated to stable. Even though there are declination as well as increasement, however they are not incredibly significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '350 million'.
Suggestion: 350 million
...d sales occurred in march which reached 350 millions of dirhams while the lowest level occurred...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
..., the gold sales in dubai reach to 200. during january to february, the graphic tends ...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '150 million'.
Suggestion: 150 million
...old rates jumped down slowly till under 150 millions of dirhams. In August, the trend leans to ...
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Line 7, column 464, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it could jump down significantly again. In the last trimester which contains Octob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19018404908 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68006189388 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7382407517 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110383609058 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514679700587 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525830886659 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910123324132 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198850519518 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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