The graph gives information about the visits from France and North America for holiday and business in the past.
The given line charts illustrate the changes of number of visitors from france and north america for reasons relating to holiday and business in an unclear period in the past.
Regarding to the first chart, it can be seen that holiday visitors from france showed an upward trend from January to July, namely increasing sixfold comparing with the first month and reaching 3 million people in the latter month. After that time, the figure presented a complete opposite trend and plummeted rapidly to 0.5 million in december. Increasingly, the visitors from north america indicated the similarity trend but much more moderate pattern due to the rise from 1 million to 1.7 million in the about first 9 months of this year before declining to the starting point in december.
In the terms of business visits, the difference between the common tendency of france travelers and that of north america travelers continue to be relatively small. To be more specific, the figure of france just soared up in the period of January-April and September-december and was fluctuated between 0.2 million and 0.47 million; meanwhile, north america also witness the same drift and moved between 0.1 million and 0.3 million.
Overall, more visits from france’s citizens than that from north American for both travel and business purposes can be obviously drawn throughout 2 line charts. Moreover, the last months are not prefered for people’s holiday; meanwhile, this is the perfect time for working.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19502074689 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66833048994 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4390427451 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322663255556 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148049339377 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981072198136 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222097779431 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885143672042 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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