The graph on the right side gives information on wages over ten years of period in the USA Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown

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The graph on the right side gives information on wages over ten years of period in the USA.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of growth rate of income over a decade. In addition to that, the line diagram is comparing the percentage of variation in salaries from 1993-2003 in America.

Overall, the growth was almost identical in the rate of wages within a decade. Even though, the peak was recorded in the year 1998 whereas the trough was seen in 2002 in context to the percentage of variance in income.

At the beginning of a decade, the first four years had shown normal fluctuation in terms of people's incomes with a variance of 2-3%. Although, the following years had observed the continuous drastic changes in which the year 1998 was the highest growth rate in wages with 6% and again it drops down to 3%. and then the proportion reached even its lowest value accounted to 1%. However, the percentage of the growth rate of wages was starting to rise in the closing year of a decade with a figure of 2%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50330176824 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0973941572 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949201278022 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434485621898 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301973395224 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610097137792 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231308229412 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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