The graph shows the annual sales of hardware and software between 1992 and 2002

Essay topics:

The graph shows the annual sales of hardware and software between 1992 and 2002

Writing task 1
This particular line graph illustrates the sales annual of hardware and software from the year 1992 to 2002.
According to the data, in the year 1992, the number of units sold software was 25000 units sold. As is observed from the graph , the sales volume of games software increased between 1992 and 1995. Since then the number of units has fluctuated between 35000 and 30000 units sold.
On the contrary, the sales amount for hardware increased markedly and the number reached almost near the sales amount of the software. Similarly, the sales amount of games increased and reached to over 30000 units sold in1996. From 1999 to 2002 the amount of hardware has increased slightly.
In summary, the graph shows that sales figure have gone up and down over the period described.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, so, then, in summary, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 666.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25412923674 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0876148485 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.25 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41567641058 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17898904458 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131296993166 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257394635685 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134944416294 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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