The graph shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France Russia and America between 2000 and 2015

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The graph shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia, and America between 2000 and 2015

The line graph gives information on how many Vietnamese students studying abroad in several countries such as France, Russia, and America from 2000 to 2015.

It is clear that both the number of Vietnamese students selecting France and America for learning increased, while the figure for Russia dumped. Overall, the figure for American seen the highest growth over the period shown.

In 2000, 3.5 million of Vietnamese students enrolling in France, higher than the figures for Russia and American was 0.5 million and 1.5 million students, respectively. After 5 years, these number for Russia and France experienced a decline by approximately 1 million students, in contrast, there was an increase by 1 million in the number of Vietnamese students learning at America.

However, the number of Vietnamese students learning in America witnessed a threefold rise to 5 million people in the next 15 years, surpassing France as the most popular country in 2015. In addition, the figure for France remained relatively stable during the period from 2005 to 2010, but later rose to nearly 4.7 million students in 2015. Finally, there was a fall by 500 Vietnamese students studying in France in 2010, which was followed by an increase to 2.5 million students in 2015.

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Essays by user EmmaLe0512 :

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, while, in addition, in contrast, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18048780488 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67959882282 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517073170732 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3505072179 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388923613342 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191478302538 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992792587195 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258893889981 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663574617189 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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