The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the changes in the income of four cafes in New York including The Team Room, Internet Express, Wi-fi Cafe and Cafe Cool over the last year.

As can be seen from the figure, the trend in most of the cafes’ income was upward except for The Tea Room having a downward trend. At the beginning of the year, the data showed that the earnings level of The Tea Room was almost $160,000, which was the highest among the four ones. However, it went down significantly to under $50,000 in December, lower than the others.

By contrast, Internet Express witnessed a gradual fall to June, but went up steadily ending the year at approximately $130,000. Wi-fi Cafe started at a lower point and caught up with Internet Express in June and then rocketed to around $190,000, ended the period with the first rank though it experienced a slight fall for 3 months between July and September. Cafe Cool fluctuated during the first ten months, but it followed the positive direction and reached the peak of $120,000 by the end of the year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, then, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69892473118 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37130907255 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.976349575 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183688593166 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842368556117 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110877536397 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158595373524 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135210834643 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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