The graph shows the civilization of 65 ages of the adult in 10 years from 1940. This survey had occurred in 3 deputies of Asia, Europe and America. Till 2040, generally, all of these countries rose significantly.
From 1940 to around 1990s, USA and Sweden changed in the same way. The population of Sweden, however, is less than the USA around 2-4%. At this time, the proportion of Japan fell a little and returned to its original level of 5% by the soon after 2000.
The proportion of the population of Japan and Sweden increased around 5% from the begin of the 20th century. Then, Sweden decreased a few low rates by some years ago and later 2020 before Japan increased substantially in 2030. Meanwhile, the figure of the USA quite steady and rise noticeably at the end of this period.
All of these countries peaked markedly during the latest 10 years. Japan highlighted by their proportion (10% in the middle between 2020 and 2040 to 25% in 2040). And the others the USA, Sweden sequentially are around 23% and 25.5%.
To summarise, Japan had the best essential growth across the whole period measured. Sweden held the second place and the USA was at the latest one even though it had been the highest at the begin.
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 67
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 84
- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pan and Sweden increased around 5% from the begin of the 20th century. Then, Sweden decre...
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... even though it had been the highest at the begin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, while, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63133640553 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47969948013 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576036866359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6775019155 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7857142857 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104476310168 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399739903896 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589589043251 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620084508302 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475799973613 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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