The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates levels of people identification for 4 British figures based on their photographs among 4 ages different groups.

In summary, it is obvious that among the 4 groups surveyed, the 41 to 60 age group does the best perform at recognizing public figures, whereas, the performance of those aged 20 and lowest seems to be the least impressive.

As to the bar chart, the queen is the highest recognized, with everyone ages 21 and above and the vast majority of those who are less than 20 to identify her. The Prime Minister is recognized by up to 90% of public aged 41 to 60, Followed by the 80% of the 21-40 group, around the second third of the over 60 age group and only half of the youngest age group.

Chancellor and mayor of London are both identified by only 20% of those under 20. However, while the people age over 40 is identifiable for up to 70 and the later is more recognized across the 21-40 and 41-60 age groups ( both at 60% ).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed across the 21-40 and 41-60 age groups both at 60% .
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Suggestion: .
... 21-40 and 41-60 age groups both at 60% .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, third, whereas, while, as to, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4406779661 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5673665572 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2130757881 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0445219935782 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289831747634 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406509047889 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415038779183 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441707210769 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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