The graph shows underground station passenger numbers in London.Summaries the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The graph shows underground station passenger numbers in London.

Summaries the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph depicts hundreds of underground station commuters in England travelling between 6:00am to 22:00pm time period.

It is clearly seen that the highest number of passengers travelled between 7:00am to 8:00am, which was, about 400. The minority of commuters chose time period of 6:00am and 16:00pm. Probing further, passengers prefer 17:00pm to 18:00pm time for underground station, that is the second most favourite time among U.K. people. it was calibrated below 400 commuters. Next, it showed fluctuated couting of passengers from 8am to 18pm.

However, while underground commuters show the least interest at time of 16:00pm the proportions of passengers escalate until 18:00pm. Then, the number of passengers were dwindle in next two hours. Moving further, number of commuters had declined and then increased suddenly after 20:00pm. The data was about 125 and 200 respectively.

Overall, although majority of passengers are using the underground station in the morning and the evening but other times preferred the least by commuters.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'show the least'.
Suggestion: show the least
... However, while underground commuters show least interest at time of 16:00pm the proport...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '  the least'.
Suggestion:   the least
...ng and evening but other times preferred least by commuters.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1811023622 4.92477711251 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27246595369 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716535433071 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7573163576 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149410460986 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735183099429 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391878614231 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102575708483 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108420543266 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 11.4140731707 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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