The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
<span id="docs-internal-guid-19e93ddb-7fff-3d21-de24-2da7ec1eee5c"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">The given line graph provides the world population in the last two centuries and the predicted population until the end of twenty-first century. Besides, the provided bar chart illustrates the differences between the population of wealthy nations and developing nations during the terms 2015-2040.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">Overall, according to the data, humanity will face the population explosion during the upcoming years and this global problem appear due to the upsurge in the number of citizens among developing regions.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">To be specific into the line graph, from 18th century to the former half of 19th century, global population witnessed a gradual rise from approximate 1 billion to more than double. After that, this number sharply climbed in the following 100 years and is believed to reach the peak of more than 8 billion in the period between 2040 and 2060. Finally, the experts anticipated that the human race will have 6 billion citizens in the end of 21th century.</span></p><br><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">Turning to the bar chart, developing countries are experiencing population explosions in which their number of citizen is predicted to double in just 25 years. In contrast, developed nations is said to maintain their population around 1.2 billion people over the period taken survey.</span></p><div><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"><br></span></div></span>
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops Do you think it is a positive or negative development 89
- The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries: USA, France, Egypt, Malaysia, BrazilSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 965.302439024 257% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.67832167832 4.92477711251 176% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.6520696397 2.65546596893 401% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 283.868780488 218% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.45097560976 152% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 331.011782268 43.030603864 769% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 496.4 112.824112599 440% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.2 22.9334400587 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0461087518637 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298288981685 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221861056037 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461087518637 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.1 13.2329268293 363% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -37.14 61.2550243902 -61% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 6.51609756098 351% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.6 10.3012195122 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.95 11.4140731707 297% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 39.0 11.4329268293 341% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.0658536585 226% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.