The graphs below show the average monthly expenditure on children’s sports and participation in different sports in the UK from 2008 to 2014.
The line charts show information about the average monthly money by British parents on their children's sports and the number of children participating in three sports between 2008 and 2014. Overall, the profound observation is that parents took much more expenditure to their's sports and football was always considered as the most favorite activity over the consecutive years.
In the first year of the period, children's sports cost 20 pounds monthly and kept a continuous increase in the next years, approximately 33 pounds. Regarding the number of children enjoy three different sports, in 2008, soccer topped the list with about 8 million, far exceeding swimming and athletics which were two and 0,5 million respectively. Except for a slight dip in 2010, those who took part in soccer kept increasing overtime and stopped at about 9 million.
Another steady growth was swimming with near four million in 2014, doubling the 2008 quantity. athletics experienced stable between 2008 and 2010, then gathering pace in the next two years before slightly declining in 2014, reaching a near fivefold increase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Athletics
...on in 2014, doubling the 2008 quantity. athletics experienced stable between 2008 and 201...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32386363636 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66761817455 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670454545455 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0430581502 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273208993381 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118289058284 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121828726216 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176489915825 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111222329185 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.