The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show the proportion of energy consumption for various kind of household and the involvement in producing greenhouse gases in Australia.
The first glance at both charts reveals that water heating and heating and cooling consume more energy than others. They consume more than 20% of energy. However, this consumption rate also looks proportional to the contribution to greenhouse effect which gives higher rate than others, 25% and 38% respectively. On the contrary, cooking and standby consume just a tenth of energy with 5% for each, this low consumption affects the contribution to greenhouse effect as well which donate just 4% and 3% respectively.
It is also observed that around a fifth of the energy is used by lighting and refrigeration. Both just need energy accordingly at 11% and 12% and apparently do not give significant impact in producing greenhouse gases, as each produces them at 7%. On the other hand, for the remaining appliances, they require 24% of energy and constitute 16% of the total greenhouse effects.
Overall, it can be concluded that the amount of energy used by household is proportional to the contribution to greenhouse effect.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2017-08-20 | teddypinky300 | 52 | view |
| 2017-08-20 | teddypinky300 | 56 | view |
| 2021-06-03 | gur1040894 | 67 | view |
- Many people believe that an international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism? 70
- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view? 50
- The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant 76
- Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming? 50
- Some people say that individuals are depending a lot on each other and some say individuals are getting more independent of each other Discuss both views and give your opinion 85
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 191 200
No. of Characters: 955 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.985 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.811 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.442 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.683 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4