The graphs below show the post-schooI quatifications hetd
by Austratians in the age groups 2b to 34 and 55 to 69.
Summarise the information by setecting and reporting main
features, and make comparisons where retevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie-chart illustrate the differences between two Australian groups(22-34 and 55-69 aged group) based on their post-schooling qualification.
Overall, the pie chart shows a three fold increase in the number of graduates. The most eye-catching changes, percentage wise, are decrease in Engineering graduates and increase in social, math and computer graduates.
The first note-worthy point is huge increment in number of people with qualification. The younger group is more than three times bigger than older group.(347,500 to 104,800)
Comparing two groups, Architecture and Medicine popularity have lessen among young group. Medicine graduates have dwindled by 4 percentage. The most palpable decrease is in engineering graduates; which is one-tenth. however, social science and others show slight decrements.
In the flip side, social, math and computer experienced spectacular popularity among youngsters; have increased by over 8 percentage. Administration and law have gained graduates by 4.1 and 2 percentages. whereas, veterinary and education shows minimal increment.
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- The graphs below show the post-schooI quatifications hetdby Austratians in the age groups 2b to 34 and 55 to 69.Summarise the information by setecting and reporting mainfeatures, and make comparisons where retevant.You should write at least 150 words. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in number of people with qualification. The younger group is more than three times ...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...chitecture and Medicine popularity have lessen among young group. Medicine graduates h...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ineering graduates; which is one-tenth. however, social science and others show slight ...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...ned graduates by 4.1 and 2 percentages. whereas, veterinary and education shows minimal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08441558442 4.92477711251 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31166921308 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4575357773 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833378004246 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270975720298 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399000501915 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484368848326 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451771690859 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.39 11.4140731707 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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