The information about the films release and tickets sales is depicted by the rendered bar graph. The data has been calibrated in percentages in year the year 1996 and 2000.
To begin with , the percentage of films on drama was noticed at 35% in the year 2000 and around 25% in 1996.After that there was a small decrease was observed in comedy movies it was 25% and 20% in year 1996 and 2000.Nevertheless, the proportion of fantasy films in year 1996 was approximately 10 percentage and after four years it was around 15%. While there was no change in ratio of romance films it was still around five percentage in 1996 and 2000.
On the other hand, in year 1996 and 2000 sales of tickets in cinema was almost noticed up than other movies tickets it was approximately 25% and 20% of comedy movies. Nonetheless, the ratio of drama films tickets was around 17% in year 2000 and 16% in year 1996. After that there was a dramatic decrease was seen in tickets of fantasy movies was around 10% and 3% in year 2000 and 1996. While im year 1996 the sales of cinema tickets on romance movies was five percent and after that four years was only 2% in 2000.
Overall, after the analyzing both chart it can be clearly seen that percentages of films realsed. and. cinema ticket sales show a down-ward trend in both years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nevertheless, nonetheless, still, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52521008403 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45570695829 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411764705882 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0223685875 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.7 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156150990815 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993862638 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046988359127 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141661822857 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588659238341 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.