The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age

Essay topics:

The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

The graph gives information about the proportion of different kinds of music albums bought by British people classified into gender and age.
Looking from an overall perspective, according to Pop and Rock music, the age range 16-24 and 25-34 were the primary customer, whereas classical music albums purchased mostly by the age over 45. Men also showed an outstanding woman in all objects.
As the chart portrays, people aged 16-24 in both Pop and rock music contributed to a higher percentage than those aged 25-34. To be precise, the former accounted for nearly 30% when the latter occupied 1-2% more. It is clear that the proportion of males, who bought pop music albums, reached 10% as surpassed females at 19% in the same category. This pattern witnessed to be similar in Rock Music and equivalent in Classical Music but with 9% in men and 6% in women. British dwellers, who surpassed 45 years old gave more favor to Classical Music (20%) than Pop and Rock at 10% and 7% respectively, which bottomed in each section. In addition, about 15% of the residents purchased classical music at the age of 25-34, the other age ranges of this object held no more than 5%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78712871287 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53403941355 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6918819443 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259095693878 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105643287176 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791313439326 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199708910254 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360703885898 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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