The graphs below show where people first got their news, both about the world and about local events, between 1987 and 1997.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The graph given illustrates the percentage of three different means of communication which people first acquired local news and world news from 1987 to 1997 in the UK.
In general, people in the UK tended to watch television to achieve world news more than other means. Meanwhile, reading newspaper was more favourable with the British in order to get local news.
To specify, the rate of people who watched television to get world news began at 65% in 1987, which was 2.5 times and 6 times higher than the figure for newspaper and radio. The percentage reduced dramatically before...
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