The graphs below shows the weekly earning of men and women for the 16 59 age groups as per their education level
The given tabular layout depicts the information about weekly earning by men ,and women into euros during the age per 16-59 through per education level.It if clear,and coherent representation.
Overall,it is evident that the most amount of into masculinity category,and minimum amount ratio in faminine category in both component graduation,and below graduation.
Adding from details, that In men ,and women categories further divided into sessions graduation,and below graduation.First of all, In men category of graduation session have data from 16-59 that 250,350,390,410,610,and 690 .nextly In another men component that is believed graduation level have been data ratio 100, 200,310,400,500,500 Respectively.
Ultimately,that In women category is data amount differ from men In female session of data from 16-59 that graduation section 250,300, 300,300,300 .In another section of below graduation level to data ratio 200,190,250,250,230,220,and 250 Responsiblity .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24444444444 4.92477711251 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.09208848252 2.65546596893 154% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.482926829268 1657% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7222166888 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.75 112.824112599 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.75 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218140510025 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148592974348 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115804474207 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148592974348 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115804474207 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.2329268293 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.5 11.4140731707 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.4329268293 188% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.