The given line graphs illustrate the changes in the trends of the urban and rural population and by different age groups during the period of time, commencing from 1950 to 2020 and give the prediction to 2040.
Perceptibly, the total rate of people living in urban and rural areas significantly appreciated from 1950 to 2020 and this trend is predicted to continue to 2040. Meanwhile, the proportion of people aged 15-65 seems to rank first over the mentioned years, despite the insignificant accrual from 2030 to 2040.
Regarding the total rate of people living in urban and rural areas, it initiated at 11%, which was followed by an exponential upswing with 40% in 2020 and is predicted to continue to ramp up to 43% in 2040. Meanwhile, the percentage of city dwellers recorded a significant appreciation from 7% in 1950 to 28% in 2020 seems to continue to 38% in 2040. Especially, the rural population fluctuates at somewhere in the vicinity of 4% to 7% over the mentioned years.
When it comes to the trends in age structure, the rate of people aged 15-65 ramped up ceaselessly from 6% in 1950 to 33% in 2020 and is predicted to continue and leap to its peak of 35% in 2040. From 1950 to 1960, the percentage of people under 15 years old commenced at 3% then appreciated to 5%. The opposite pattern was recorded in the rate of people aged over 65 while it receded to 2% in 1960 although initiated at 3%. The ensuing shown years, there was an insignificant disproportion in both the rate of people aged under 15 and over 65.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... and by different age groups during the period of time, commencing from 1950 to 2020 and give ...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an and rural areas, it initiated at 11%, which was followed by an exponential up...
^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rural areas, it initiated at 11%, which was followed by an exponential upswing w...
^^
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... predicted to continue to ramp up to 43% in 2040. Meanwhile, the percentage of ci...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 33.7804878049 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60805860806 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74977661845 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450549450549 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1753847394 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.8 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358125318325 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15951538064 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15013424577 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284443752682 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168639494141 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... and by different age groups during the period of time, commencing from 1950 to 2020 and give ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an and rural areas, it initiated at 11%, which was followed by an exponential up...
^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rural areas, it initiated at 11%, which was followed by an exponential upswing w...
^^
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... predicted to continue to ramp up to 43% in 2040. Meanwhile, the percentage of ci...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 33.7804878049 219% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60805860806 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74977661845 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450549450549 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1753847394 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.8 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358125318325 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15951538064 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15013424577 0.0843802449381 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284443752682 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168639494141 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.