The chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, *2021, and future projections for 2025.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the bar graph contrasting the number of $ billion received from three kind of southland’s main products namely, International tourism, dairy products and meat product in three distinct year including in 2000, * 2001 and year estimate in 20025.
Percertibly, The amount of money exported had leaped in 2021 with all international tourism, thereafter these figures still remain with dairy products in 2001, However, Meat products had an accounting for lowest.
The Total money exported from international tourism and dairy products in 2000 had been 8 and 7 billion respectively, thereafter these data had surged exponentially with 9 and 10 billion in 2021, while the amount of money of meat products has a slight diminution from 6 in 2000 to 5.5 billion in 2021.
When it comes to the prediction year in 2025, The international tourism products rank first in the amount of money exported with 10 billion while the second highest position belong to the dairy products with 9.5 billion, However only 5 billion of meat products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, still, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88520866936 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.1889403475 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 217.0 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.23603664747 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778160070181 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550633455368 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155337009896 0.0843802449381 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550633455368 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155337009896 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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