The given graphs show changes in the trends of people in urban and rural and by different age groups commencing from 1950 to 2040.
Perceptibly, the proportion of population in urban and rural areas can be expected to appreciate. The rate of age from 15 to 65 will rank first in 2040.
When it comes to urban and rural population trends, the rate of rural people was an insignificant disproportion in 2020 with 5% and will unchage in 20 years later. The percent of urban population nudged up to 30% and will suddenly leap until 2040. the rate of total ramped up from 1950 with 10% to 2020 with 40% and tends to accrete by 5% in 2040.
Accruing from 5% in 1950 to 33% in 2020, the percentage of people from 15-65 will increase by 5% in 20 years later. The proportion of people under 15 and over 65 reached 3% in 1950 however the proportion of people under 15 ramped up by 2% the proportion of people being in inverse proportion over 65 to 2% in 1960 , there was a modest disproportion in 2020 and will reach 5% in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... 30% and will suddenly leap until 2040. the rate of total ramped up from 1950 with ...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...inverse proportion over 65 to 2% in 1960 , there was a modest disproportion in 202...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31770833333 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53424556848 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432291666667 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2270365117 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379645553472 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203441743594 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.212740909079 0.0843802449381 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321385978243 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.259344302497 0.0819641961636 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.