Given is the table chart depicting the percentage of three main age groups who watch different TV programmes in a European country in the 2012s.
It is perceptible that the 11-15 age group often watch cartoons, sports as the highest, followed by feature films programs that was recommended in the 15-20 age group. Finally, the group aged from 21 to 25 was recorded in news, soap opera, TV dramas programs as the most popular.
When it came to the aged 11-15 group, cartoons was recorded as the highest with 29%, followed by sports, features films and soap opera with index 22%, 18%, 17% respectively. With 6% in news and 8% in TV dramas being the two lowest indexes in the age group.
Standing at 10% in TV dramas and 12% soap opera programs which were in the 15-20 age group. The index 18% was the same rate in cartoons and sports programs, following that the news had resulted in more than 1%. The feature films were the most recommended in this age group with 23%.
Regarding the 21 to 25 age group, the most popular program was recorded in the news with 23%, nearby was 21% in sports and 20% in feature films. Following that the 19%, 13% and 4% were recorded in soap opera, TV dramas and cartoons programs respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...recommended in this age group with 23%. Regarding the 21 to 25 age group, the mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55656108597 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35642797686 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47963800905 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2445484253 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183199838447 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959176607868 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813668939211 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140972048145 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907816752294 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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