Households owning and renting accomodation in England and Wales 1918 to 2011
The chart illustrates the proportion of people who posses and lease accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in two different British countries named England and Wales.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of citizen who owned houses was higher than those who rented accommodation throughout the time period in England and Wales.
At the first glance, the percentage of tenant accommodation moderately went down just over 9% from 1918 to 1939 and there was an equal in 1953. Regardless, the amount was went down quickly until 2001 and then rose steadily over 7% in 2011.
In contrast, the percentage of families owned their house were substantially increase just over 10% from 1918 to 1939. Furthermore, the percentage was remain stable until 1953 and dramatically increased until 1991. However, there was a slightly increase in the portion of home owner from 1991 to 2001 before decreased slowly over next 10 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...es owned their house were substantially increase just over 10% from 1918 to 1939. Furthe...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...o 1939. Furthermore, the percentage was remain stable until 1953 and dramatically incr...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...ncreased until 1991. However, there was a slightly increase in the portion of home owner from 1991 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75116137093 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0603694744 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147788559299 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685069119914 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558168189904 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978907605199 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430719396337 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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