Bar chart is statistical representation of variability of UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go full time work after leaving college.
At a glance, it is observed that striking factor is being the trend of variation in student of UK.
On statically analyses, 17,735 number of gratitude students do part time work. Negable 3500 number of gratitude students do vounltary work which was five times less than part time work. Apart from that , Shockingly 29665 number of gratitude students do further study ,further study reached the apex on the chart. Unfortunately 16635 gratitude students unemployed . Unemployed and part time work have bleak difference.
On post gratitude students , pat time work and further study has nearly difference of 190 numver of students .wheareas, 2535 number of post gratitude student par time work and 2725 students do further study. Apat from that , only 345 number of post graduated students do vunltary work which was bottom of the chart . Alarmingly , 1625 number of posr gratitude students were unemployed .
In the nutsell , overall both gratitude and postgraduate gratitude students are maximum unemployed . Both the students gave least prefered to vulntary work.
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- IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...and postgraduate student who did not go full time work after leaving college. At a glan...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... 17,735 number of gratitude students do part time work. Negable 3500 number of gratitude ...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ary work which was five times less than part time work. Apart from that , Shockingly 2966...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ess than part time work. Apart from that , Shockingly 29665 number of gratitude st...
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Suggestion: ,
...r of gratitude students do further study ,further study reached the apex on the ch...
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Suggestion: .
...tely 16635 gratitude students unemployed . Unemployed and part time work have blea...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...de students unemployed . Unemployed and part time work have bleak difference. On post gr...
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Suggestion: ,
... difference. On post gratitude students , pat time work and further study has nea...
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...rly difference of 190 numver of students .wheareas, 2535 number of post gratitude ...
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Suggestion: ,
...tudents do further study. Apat from that , only 345 number of post graduated stude...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ltary work which was bottom of the chart . Alarmingly , 1625 number of posr gratit...
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Suggestion: ,
...ich was bottom of the chart . Alarmingly , 1625 number of posr gratitude students ...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... posr gratitude students were unemployed . In the nutsell , overall both gratitud...
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Suggestion: ,
...udents were unemployed . In the nutsell , overall both gratitude and postgraduate...
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Suggestion:
...oth gratitude and postgraduate gratitude students are maximum unemployed . Both t...
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...atitude students are maximum unemployed . Both the students gave least prefered t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39153439153 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83624870267 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4105082005 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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