The illustration shows how chocolate is produced.
The diagram demonstrates the way in which the chocolate is manufactured from cacao seeds with the use of some essentials including the beans crusher, the oven, and the grinder.
As shown in the picture, there are ten main phases in the process, commencing with growing the seeds of the cacao trees and culminating with pressing material produced.
At the first stage of the production, the cacao trees are grown mainly in South America, Africa, and Indonesia, then, when the beans are ripe, identifiable when they turn red, they are harvested. Upon being harvested, those pods are split to take the white cacao beans inside for the next step. At the following stage, the cacao beans are brought into the fermenter, and then they are spread under prolonged exposure to the sun to dry.
After fermenting and dehydrating, the process continues when those seeds are packed into large sacks, taken by train or lorry, and transported to the factory. In the factory, beans being roasted at 350 degrees, after which, those beans are sent to a grinder to be crushed and separated from their outer shell. In the final stage, the inner part goes through a press and the liquid chocolate is made as a result of this pressing phase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beans'' or 'bean's'?
Suggestion: beans'; bean's
...he use of some essentials including the beans crusher the oven and the grinder As...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e beans crusher the oven and the grinder As shown in the picture there are ten ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75119617225 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34281748216 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 209.0 22.4926829268 929% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 993.0 112.824112599 880% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 209.0 22.9334400587 911% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.0 5.23603664747 611% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0462675875712 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462675875712 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356494621571 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231744877747 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 105.4 13.2329268293 796% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -132.2 61.2550243902 -216% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.6 10.3012195122 812% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.18 8.06136585366 213% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.4329268293 499% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 85.6 10.9970731707 778% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.0658536585 515% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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