Is it important for all towns and cities to have large outdoor public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, more and more nations decided to construct public spaces such as park and square in most towns and cities. However, some people argue that the government is wasting too much land to build parks and squares which are useless. Nevertheless, I totally agree with the statement that government should make more outdoor public spaces.
From the point of money, the government should build more parks and squares to save citizen’s money in travelling to other places to relax. Since more parks should be built, people can have clean environment and unpolluted places to recharge energy and have a short break after a busy day with their friends or family. The individuals do not have to pay more money to find somewhere to have a small picnic with their child.
Construct more public spaces not only cause a change to citizen’s money, but it also enables individuals improve their health. Owing to that public spaces such as parks, elder people can make more friends and prevent health problems by going to the park every early morning to do exercises or just go jogging around the park.Furthermore, parents and their child can also create healthy standard of living by playing with each other at the weekend or at the end of the day in the park near their house. Having more squares will enable the environment to decline the amount of emissions which is created by vehicles, thus, we can get a better health in the future.
In conclusion, it is essential for us if the government build more public places in all towns and cities because it brings us many advantages for our health and our lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ises or just go jogging around the park.Furthermore, parents and their child can also creat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49091307279 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.642845002 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259567033975 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105982353347 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486068870165 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161648449491 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402117749628 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.