It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that townships and metropolises need to construct big pubic zones like squares or parks. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
There are two main reasons why public spaces should be built in metropolitan cities. One reason is that many public areas may attract tourists traveling the city. Because the city will be refurbished and this thing will make the city newer. For example, Times Square in New York City is visited by many tourists annually. As a result, tourism services may income big millions of dollars. Furthermore, having open spaces may make residents of the city have better health. Since residents tend to join in outdoor activities such as playing sports, enjoying the flower in new parks which people may keep fit or relax. Therefore, it might prevent them from risk diseases such as obesity or stress.
Apart from the practical benefits above, I believe that more public parks can help young people have more knowledge about natural life. Because there are a variety of species like rare trees, it can be said that this is a big natural source that educates them on how to identify and protect these species. For example, in Vietnam schools tend to hold a small project for your students that research the trees they want and practice growing them. Hence, the children can access practical knowledge instead of learning by small pictures in books.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that there are a great number of advantages if we construct large public areas in big places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
... and metropolises need to construct big pubic zones like squares or parks. Personally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96577946768 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42287980357 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8844441767 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221393141306 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648478205469 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485028210664 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116688529041 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548761643499 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.