The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The process diagram demonstrates the manufacture of chocolate by following a number of steps. Overall, there are various stages which the row pods go through in order to be turned into chocolate, beginning from the collection of ripe red pods and culminate in processing their inner part.
To begin with, the ride red pods are harvested from cocao trees that flourish in S.America, Africa and Indonesia. After that, the pods collected, are crashed in order to provide white cocao beans that are part of their inner shell. Following that, the beans are fermented and then they are spread into a large vessel which is exposed to sun to dry. In the subsequent stage, the dried pods are inserted into large sacks, which are transported by train or lorry to the factory. The next step is to roast the beans in specific temperature. The oven assists in this process. The beans are then put into a specific machine to go through the crushing process, where the outer shell is removed from the inner pods. Last of all, the inner part of the beans is pressed by large milestones, to produce liquid chocolate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: America
...ted from cocao trees that flourish in S.America, Africa and Indonesia. After that, the ...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ture. The oven assists in this process. The beans are then put into a specific mach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77486910995 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47229100247 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549738219895 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0717664582 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0222974599944 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0105413104629 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0163880036379 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0190040529033 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000232208539913 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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