The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates how much travelling happened to and from the UK, over a period of 20 years, with a further classification by the destinations most preferred by UK residents, in 1999. As illustrated by the line chart, there was a considerable increase in the number of visits paid from and to the UK, between 1979 and 1999.
Specifically, the analysis of data shows that the number of visits to the UK by overseas residents were nearly as many as those abroad by UK residents in 1979 ( reaching from about 10 millions to approximately 11 millions, respectively). However, in 1986 there was a significant difference between the visits from and to the UK. Although both numbers increased moderately, visits from UK to abroad were importantly higher in 1986, than those to the UK the same period ( 20 millions of visits from UK residents but approximately 11 millions from overseas residents). From then, both number of visits rose steeply to reach a peak of around 51 millions and approximately 27 millions respectively, in 1999.
As can be seen from the bar chart, France was the country mostly chosen by UK residents whereas Turkey was the country least visited by the British.
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- The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
The line graph indicates how much travelling happened to and from the UK,...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as those abroad by UK residents in 1979 reaching from about 10 millions to appro...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... abroad were importantly higher in 1986, than those to the UK the same period 20...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6, than those to the UK the same period 20 millions of visits from UK residents ...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
... than those to the UK the same period 20 millions of visits from UK residents but approximat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91044776119 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97761090122 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497512437811 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5052028033 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419569715267 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218274499677 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045607444736 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288844308722 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050253392668 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.