Tourism play a vital role in economy it has brought numerous advantages to many place. And as well as there is some argue about its effect on local residents and environments. Although, there are few potential disadvantage such as spread the dirt and destroy the nature beauty of the place increase the population and disturb people. However, tourism industry promote the culture, benefits of economy and increase the businesses is far more advantages than disadvantages.
A common criticism of tourism industry is that it damage the natural beauty just because of the influence. For instance explore the beauty of the place for their own benefits and do not care of the damage other problem of the international visitors is that they disturb people where they are live such as tourist enjoy their holyday and making fun so the other people are disturb.
On the other hand, tourist industry have a huge advantages Firstly, it boost the country economy some of countries who make economy strong from tourism industry For instance Dubai, Malasia, Indonatia, Italy and many more. Secondly, its promote the culture here in Pakistan there are different kind cultures like sindhi, punjabi and pathan and many more which represent the beauty of Pakistan. Lastly, tourism increase the businesses such as, accommodation, restaurant and other kind of business as well which contribute our economy.
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In conclude, there are both advantages and drawbacks of international tourist it destroy the natural beauty and the rule of country but as well as its have many advantages its enhance and contribute in economy and show the culture all our the world so international tourism have huge benefits than disadvantages
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
Tourism play a vital role in economy it has brought ...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'many places'.
Suggestion: many places
...y it has brought numerous advantages to many place. And as well as there is some argue abo...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disturbed'.
Suggestion: disturbed
... and making fun so the other people are disturb. On the other hand, tourist industry...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...ther hand, tourist industry have a huge advantages Firstly, it boost the country economy s...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...stry have a huge advantages Firstly, it boost the country economy some of countries w...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the countries') or simply say ''some countries''.
Suggestion: some of the countries; some countries
...s Firstly, it boost the country economy some of countries who make economy strong from tourism in...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'destroys'?
Suggestion: destroys
...d drawbacks of international tourist it destroy the natural beauty and the rule of coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22101449275 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73086274301 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496376811594 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5012751569 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 5.23603664747 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249757183162 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101784411345 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619476677342 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164385595272 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572071679124 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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