Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Mark Johnson, I was a passenger in the 6E-129 flight to Sydney on the 25th July 2020 08:40 AM. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left my bag at the baggage claim and I'd like to collect it next week.
I usually only carry a cabin trolley with me on travels. This time, however, I was meeting my cousins after a long time and was carrying gifts in another bag which was supposed to be collected from the baggage claim on arrival at the Sydney Airport and due to a force of habit, I completely forgot to collect the bag and simply left for my hotel. Only after reaching the hotel, I realised that I have forgotten my bag at the airport. It is a black trolley, about 24 inches diagonally and a label with my name on it. The bag has been marked with a "handle with care" tag at the departure airport due to the delicate nature of contents inside the bag.
I request to keep my bag available at the airport security for me to collect it on Monday, at around 9 AM. I will carry my passport for identification. Also, please be careful as the contents in the bag are made of glass and can break on rough handling.
Thanks & Regards,
Mark Johnson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ve left my bag at the baggage claim and Id like to collect it next week. I usua...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ame on it. The bag has been marked with a 'handle with care' tag at the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30837004405 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46011583029 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3164215605 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175410442661 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641037922141 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705528955947 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126293722482 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446624748371 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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