Life cycle of salmon
Now like most of an animal life in water fish is a popular species. They're a source of food for people but they don't know how the fish appear. Here are the life of salmon fish, all 3 step start to the upper river and at the open sea.
Firstly, adult salmon return to the upper river to lay an egg under the small stones and reeds approximate 5 or 6 month for the little fish appear begin the cycle life as they parent use to have. After 4 year they move to the lower river where is fast flowing, pass it and live at the open sea when they was an adult salmon like they parent return to the river lay an egg and end the life at the place they have was born.
Secondly, in the cycle life the have to experiances 3 stey when they was a fry fish in upper river to the large place to live it open sea. The other fish always have short life to live but in that time they have a lot of thing to pass.
End the life, they have to return and return that not only the food for people but only the life of they make people to think.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: They're
...ife in water fish is a popular species. Theyre a source of food for people but they do...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re a source of food for people but they dont know how the fish appear. Here are the ...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ear begin the cycle life as they parent use to have. After 4 year they move to the ...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...and end the life at the place they have was born. Secondly, in the cycle life the ...
^^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...life to live but in that time they have a lot of thing to pass. End the life, they have to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 3.85781990521 4.92477711251 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.63761735936 2.65546596893 62% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469194312796 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7190317765 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256346507976 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131421298075 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742101405615 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165834636588 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023562318094 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.4 11.4140731707 47% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 40.7170731707 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.