life cycle of the silkworm.

Essay topics:

life cycle of the silkworm.

The diagram elucidates the life cycle of the silkworm. At the first glance, it is evident that the evolving of silkworm into the moth is going to take several times, approximately between 8 weeks and 10 weeks.

Firstly, the moth leaves its eggs in the leaf in order to make it crack opened by itself later. Following this, the eggs will be stayed in leaf for some times and after that, the moth eggs are going to be opened in the next 10 days and it turns into silkworm larva. Once it becomes larva, it used to consume its meal from the mulberry leaf. Furthermore, for changing larva into the next step, it will take from 4 through to 6 weeks for larva to evolve its shape which is covered by the silk throad.

In accordance with the next process above, larva needs to wait for several days to alter its shape becoming cocoon. At this point, larva will be fully covered by the silk throad and it will take more times to make larva evolving into moth. Overall, it is going to take 16 days for larva to evolve into the moth.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33160621762 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07845011923 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502590673575 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3618854311 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107868381813 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885171284422 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203034917274 0.0843802449381 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129291024636 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162347500809 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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