The line charts above representate the number of Australian coming-out to Japan, US, China, and India for the last twenty two years specifically from 1990 to 2012. It is measured in percentage.
Overall, the graph rose dramatically in China, thus it had the significant increase in export from Australia from year to year. Instead, the precentage fell steadily in Japan. According to the data, in 1990 to 2000, there was various numbers of coming out in four countries. China increased slightly around 2% to 5% while India had the same amount approximately 1% in the span of that year. Uncertain data reached by US that it decreased about 3% in first five years otherwise it increased 3% in five years later. In other words, US had no rise number in the first ten years whereas Japan hit down dramatically circa 9% from 1990 to 2000. Then in 2000 to 2012, China attained the highest percentage hike, it was around 22% in the last twelve years whilst India run into around 6% started at 1% for the first ten years and it had down to 5% in 2010 to 2012. From the Japan’s line, it seen there was no significant drop for the last twelve years and the percentage settled nearly 13% then US fell sharply about 5% in 2010, contraly up toward 2%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, thus, whereas, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48691099476 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41249363622 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9636344648 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32582519885 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135980433105 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504735143913 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32582519885 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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