The line graph compares the quantity of coffee exportation from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over a decade; from 2002to 2012.
Overall, it is clearly evident that, Brazilians were by far the most predominant nation in exporting coffee over the period. However, the quantity of coffee sent abroad saw an upward trend in all the nations.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, in 2002, Costa Rican exportation of coffee was approximately 15 kg (million) higher than Brazil and Colombia at around 12 kg (million) and 5 kg (million) respectively. By the year end, sending coffee abroad from Brazil had increased notably to a peak of 25 kg (million)
In the year 2006, the figure for exporting coffee from Costa Rica declined to around 7 kg (million), before rising steadily to 20 kg (million) in 2012 staying lower than of their Brazilian counterpart. Colombian rate of coffee exporting, rather fluctuated over the period, to finish off at 15 kg (million)
- The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 73
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 84
- The diagram shows the stages of processing cocoa beans 82
- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. 62
- The bar graph indicates sales figures for reading materials from 2002 to 2012.Write a report to a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ation of coffee was approximately 15 kg million higher than Brazil and Colombia at arou...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...han Brazil and Colombia at around 12 kg million and 5 kg million respectively. By the y...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...lombia at around 12 kg million and 5 kg million respectively. By the year end, sending ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ad increased notably to a peak of 25 kg million In the year 2006, the figure for exp...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...from Costa Rica declined to around 7 kg million, before rising steadily to 20 kg millio...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...illion, before rising steadily to 20 kg million in 2012 staying lower than of their Bra...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...over the period, to finish off at 15 kg million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67995384377 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6857064384 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210982981481 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116763007074 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957181172803 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156129486775 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949748054645 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.