The line graph delineates the unemployment rate among three distinct countries namely Spain, Germany, and Italy in eight different years.
In 1991, the jobless rate in Spain was higher than the other nations, and further, from 1993 to 1995, it was stood at 18 %, while it exhibited a gradual decrease of 6% in the year 1999. In the upcoming years, 2001 to 2003, it followed a similar trend without any fluctuation. Finally, it showed the lowest percentage, which accounted for 9%. (accounting for 9%)
Turning to Germany and Italy, the jobless rate in Italy rose steadily to 15% in 1995 from 8% in the year 1991, as well as stabled at 12% between 1997 and 1999, whereas there was a slight decrease from 1999 to 2003. In the end, the unemployment rate was stable at 8% from 2003 to 2005.
Coming to Germany, it followed a rising trend with minor fluctuations between 1991 and 1997, but ahead it decreased by 3% in 2001. Eventually, it hit the highest point in the year 2005.
Overall, Spain had the highest rate of unemployment than the other two countries, while Germany took the third position in this jobless rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Accounting
...est percentage, which accounted for 9%. accounting for 9% Turning to Germany and Italy, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, third, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51433571725 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4783362816 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181151967969 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771308720629 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683759982666 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110598016125 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716579642816 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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