The given line graph provides an overview of the visits by UK and foreign inhabitants .The horizontal axis indicates over a 20 years period from 1979 to 1999.The provided bar chart gives an insight about the most popular nations which were reached by British residents during the year of 1999.
First of all,in 1979, the intentions of both the visitors were approximately constant around 10 millions to reach their own destinations but the UK residents rose very dramatically and reached the peak point of 50 million.However,the overseas residents showed their less interest to visit UK and they escalated to 25 million in 1999 from 10 million in 1979.
Furthermore,in 1999, the France was visited by 10 million UK residents and turkey was less preferred by 2 million UK residents whereas the Greece and USA had about 3 and 4 million commuters respectively.
Overall,the UK residents were very highest in the visits to other countries than visits to the UK by foreign residents over the period of two decades and the France was very famous among all the countries to visit by UK residents in 1999.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, whereas, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98378378378 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92037000968 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.673108985 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 230.5 112.824112599 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.25 22.9334400587 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358331325237 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21866921482 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507745386702 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21866921482 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507745386702 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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