The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts how many of single-family house constructed in us by region from 2006 to 2012. Amount of houses built-in each area changed in a similar way over 4 years but different in 2 years later.
In 200, most of the houses were constructed in south, which is 900,000 homes. In contrast,there were only under 200,000 houses built-in northeast in the same year, which means the least of building constructed.
As the flow of time, the number of new building dropped significantly from 2006 to 2010, however, in 2 years after, the number of building in south and West slightly rose again, where that of Midwest remain steadily and of northeast still fell to bottom at under 50,000 houses in 2012.
Overall, after 6 years, amount of residential construction decreased multiple times in all regions of us.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nt of houses built-in each area changed in a similar way over 4 years but different in 2 years l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...uth, which is 900,000 homes. In contrast,there were only under 200,000 houses built-in...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87769784173 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74214934945 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654676258993 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3118957242 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118390749381 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065804613373 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627044873163 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760788546784 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471328524389 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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