The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

Essay topics:

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

The line graph represents how many tourists visited four distinctive Brighton attractions in UK from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, pavilion and festival were the favourite attractions. In the earlier periods, the least popular attraction was the pier but this changed to art gallery by the end of the period.
During 1980 to 1990 there was a sharp increase in the proportion of visitors visiting in pavilion from 28% to reach at its highest point of 48% in 1995 and then gradually decreased to 31% in 2010. The similar trend was shown for art gallery which increased rapidly from 22% to 37% from 1980 to 1985 then declined substantially to less than 10% over the next twenty five years.
In contrast, the number of tourists who visited the Festival fluctuated slightly but in general remained steady at about 25%. Visitors to the pier witnessed a periodic fluctuation for the beginning of twenty years before picking up of incremental trend from 12% to 22% from 2000 to 2010.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'then', 'in contrast', 'in general']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237837837838 0.268076937826 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.102702702703 0.116061578633 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0918918918919 0.0759168565197 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324324324324 0.0366838410393 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00540540540541 0.0131127313244 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.167567567568 0.155750635184 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0216216216216 0.0379272487307 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63655230212 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0594594594595 0.0210936926555 282% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0918918918919 0.0948980150116 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162162162162 0.00967000014798 168% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 971.0 1161.00487805 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84939759036 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325301204819 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28313253012 0.247514529752 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204819277108 0.171178102325 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102409638554 0.112407865282 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63655230212 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.546246751206 114% => OK
Word variations: 57.2732138193 49.3433353143 116% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7142857143 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0262308759 42.9750493124 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.689975730869 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 52.0275387263 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 3.03846153846 2.94281807926 103% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449954103469 0.418131533498 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110201409471 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0556401653666 0.0850326197045 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.745093888383 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153022901165 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244467451421 0.228904883108 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937676076985 0.108899403657 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304569720467 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106753247988 0.0812612215331 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323558829534 0.316326947829 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681519632578 0.0921553760075 74% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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